영어 Writing 연습 : A story about the picture.

영어 Writing 연습 : A story about the picture.

 

Look at the three pictures. Write about this story.


Write 25 words or more.

 

 

1. 그냥 막적었을때.

 

A girl is walkilng along the street and she doesn't have an umbrella so she is completely soaked.
In class she feels bad because it's very icky to be soaked and her book is wet so she can't read it.
A boy watched her condition so they look at the book together.

 

2. 한글적고 영어로 다시 바꾸어 봤을때. 

 

한 여자애가 길을 따라서 가고있어요. 그녀는 책을 들고있는데 우산이 없어서 홀딱 젖어버렸어요.
수업시간.. 소녀는 기분이 좋지 않아 보여요. 홀딱 젖은데다가 책까지 젖어서 읽을수도 없어요.
그때 옆의 한 소년이 소녀의 상태를 발견하고는 같이 책을 보자고 제안했고, 같이 책을 보면서 소녀는 기분이 한결 나아졌어요.

A girl is walking along the street. she has books in her hand. But she doesn't have a hand to hold an umbrella. so she is completely soaked. And then In a class, She looks feel very bad since she is not only soaked, but also her book has been wet.
At that time a boy discovers her situation and suggests sharing books, so she feels better.

 

->문법체크후

A girl is walking along the street. she has books in her hand. But she doesn't have a hand to hold an umbrella. so she is completely soaked. And then In class, She looks feels very bad since she is not only soaked but also her book has been wet.
At that time a boy discovers her situation and suggests sharing books, so she feels better.

 

3. 파파고 번역기 돌렸을때.

한 여자애가 길을 따라서 가고있어요. 그녀는 책을 들고있는데 우산이 없어서 홀딱 젖어버렸어요.
수업시간.. 소녀는 기분이 좋지 않아 보여요. 홀딱 젖은데다가 책까지 젖어서 읽을수도 없어요.
그때 옆의 한 소년이 소녀의 상태를 발견하고는 같이 책을 보자고 제안했고, 같이 책을 보면서 소녀는 기분이 한결 나아졌어요.

 

A girl is walking down the street. She was holding a book, but she didn't have an umbrella, so she got all wet.
Class time... the girl doesn't look happy. It's wet and she can't even read books since the book is also wet.
At that time, a boy next to her found the girl's condition and suggested reading a book together, and the girl felt much better while reading the book together.

 

 

1. You wrote : the girl doesn't look happy. It's wet and she can't even read books since the boo.

Feedback: Use a comma before "and" if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).

Error type: Punctuation error

Suggestion: wet, and

2. You wrote: girl felt much better while reading the book together....

Feedback: You have a problem with your verb agreement.
The verb "felt" should agree with the third person singular subject 'the girl'.
Did you mean "the girl feels much", "the girl felts much"? (va9)

Error type: Question form error

Suggestion: the girl feels much, the girl felts much

4. 그래서 바꾼것

 

A girl is walking down the street. She was holding a book, but she didn't have an umbrella, so she got all wet.
Class time... the girl doesn't look happy. It's wet, and she can't even read books since the book is also wet.
At that time, a boy next to her found the girl's condition and suggested reading a book together, so the girl looks feel much better while reading the book together.